I’m working on a writing discussion question and need guidance to help me learn.
Hi, I need help. I have already finished the assignment and have attached it and need it revised based on my professor’s feedback. It is titled revise_white_paper. I have attached the instructions and video resource so that you know what the assignment was all about :).
Professor’s Feedback:
I need help. The professor wanted me to answer this question for one of the discussion about white paper you wrote for me. She thought it was a little too vague
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Can you be a bit more specific? Succeed in a global economy how? And what kind of business(es) do you intend to target? I think you would be most successful if you focus on on type of business in one specific industry. The white paper just isn’t big enough (volume wise) to tackle too much variety here. Zero in on, for example, small print book publishers who are trying to get customers to read hard copy texts again? (I know you don’t have to take that example–I just wanted to show you how being really specific will help make the paper really work.)
Just one paragraph to be more specific. She is just trying to redirect my intensions not to be too vague
I think its a good idea to narrow the focus which might make it a little more easier for us right?
Instructions:
I have attached 1 word attached document with the week 3a discussion. Kindly be sure to write the answers in Times New Roman Size 12 Font Double-Spaced APA Format with in-text citations and page numbers Week 3a has a youtube video to watch.
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