Read the passage from How to Live on Twenty-Four Hours a Day.
Bring
it back by the scruff of the neck. Ere you have reached the station you
will have brought it back about forty times. Do not despair. Continue.
Keep it up.
Which revision uses signal words to clarify the sequence of events for readers?
procedure is to bring it back by the scruff of the neck. In fact, ere
you have reached the station you will have brought it back about forty
times. Do not despair. Continue. Keep it up.
process is to bring it back by the scruff of the neck. Ere you have
reached the station you will have brought it back about forty times.
That’s right, do not despair. Continue. Keep it up.
it back by the scruff of the neck. The truth is that once you have
reached the station you will have brought it back about forty times. The
plan is to not despair. Continue. Keep it up.
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