First I want the draft revised as per the instructor comments by Sunday Afternoon/tomorrow
After that you will continue with the other 6000 words
please don’t take the work if you will not be in a position to provide the draft by tomorrow afternoon
Description
What are the effects of coronavirus in economy in USA?
The thesis should include the following:
1. Introduction part – motives, objective, main question of the research.
2. Literature review – The authors and books you have read, papers, official data resources, etc.
3. Methodology – official data comparison, econometric model, observations, questionnaires, comparison, etc.
4. Conclusions – Which should be directly related to your research, your main question, or sub question.
5. Reccomandations.
6. Bibliography.
COMMENTS:
FOR INTRODUCTION PART – I would advice you to include in the introduction part your reason for choosing this subject,
The aim of the subject,
Which is the main question that you would like to answer by your research.
It looks very confused, you need to me clear which part of the economy you would like to search and to analyze, is it GDP, unemployment, currency value, or will you go just through different sectors like you have mentioned; tourism, service sector etc.
In short dear think deeper what exactly are you trying to search. From the introduction part it looks very confused
FOR LITERATURE REVIEW – You have mentioned in here just you sources which are not enough for the thesis.
Secondly your resources should be official not youtube source like you have mentioned in the biblography part.
Also the resources that you will go through should be related to your research subject
FOR RESEARCH METHODOLOGY – Please be clear in here, that is the core of your research. Are you going to compare what? Are you going to collect data and to analyze by yourself? Which indicators data are you going to collect and to analyze?
FOR CONCLUSION – Without giving a clear picture of what I mentioned above the conclusion can ne written. The conclusion may be very short but they should be directly related to your research
Please, according to the notes above, send me the revised draft
In addition to this, the professor has changed the politics, the thesis should be done in APA Style
20 pages / 11000 words (Single spacing)
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