Never first sentence it should be have experienced you want to avoid the ING verbs. Go back and fix your formatting ’cause you don’t want the bold for the causes and an ABC situation. It’s underline so go back and fix that. And again people of color have faced inadequate…. I don’t know about this nutrition related interventions it doesn’t have much to do with racism in healthcare although I kinda like it so just leave it. But what you should do is not have it be the first one period you should build up to it. And I’m just a little confused as to why you have so much focus on the food. You don’t have your research question at the top so I can’t really tell what your topic is. OK the fact that you’re going after the American health organizations is brilliant. Because this is a true thing. I love it. Your legislation is good. I think for your cultural norms you want to put inequality in education. Your Africa application title isn’t the full title and you want to put nurse in there too.’cause this has to do specifically with your Profession you’re going into. So you kind of went off on a tangent here. But you know what a lot of this stuff should go in your causes. This is A cause of your problem is the lack of diversity. The reference title should not be in bold. So your application you need to work on you need to look at the American nursing Association stance on racism in medicine and also you want to look at the code of ethics.
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