The writer must be an English native speaker and a professional editor. and specialists (online engagement /YouTube/ Social Media).
You need to read the questions written in red inside this document and fix this paper and make improvements. Also, you need to read the whole thing I wrote.
All my citations are poor also has mistakes
A lot of sentence covers too much information, has unclear meaning and should be divided. Also, feel free to deleted unnecessary information and that is not linked to questions or my topic.
Stay consistent with the terminology.
Delate or add anything could make this paper more than excellent
Use APA formatting for the whole paper “especially citation”
You are allowed to delete any content unclear etc…
There are some comments had already written in this paper you need to consider and fix as well as your thoughts on this document.
Improve and add more factors that constrain or encourage females and mals.
Do you think that the usage behaviors are impacted by the social or cultural aspects of the context region or country you are studying? please give attention to this question. ( I am an international student from Saudi Arabia and studying in the USA)
He talked about economic and social factors in Saudi Arabia such as privacy, many school/ universities was not ready to start to do remote including devices sometime not available.
Also, mention something about the educational system in Saudi Arabia cable years ago, and now and they have also Saudi vision 2030. see this link
https://www.moe.gov.sa/en/Pages/vision2030.aspx
Because in the past they were against any kind of online or any platform learning etc…
Talk about self-identity between males and females in Saud Arabia toward using social media.
How the ministry of education/ Saudi government in Saudi Arabia adopted online engagement these days with COVID-19
Try to make the total of this document only 22 pages, not including references
Make sure I will read each single word thanks in advance:)
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