revised the paper based on the feedback
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- there are less reference
- In methodology, you should include you research method, research object, what is your simply number, how to design this research.(must have some data ) (documentary analysis means you need to choose several documents, report and so on to analyze)
- In findings, you need analyze the data according to methodology, and analyzing the document you choose to research in methodology.
Also, in the first sentence, i wrote that i use documentary analysis and case study,but maybe i do not find the case.
(i hope you can rewrite this part,choose several documents, report and so on to analyze then write Experimental data )
* design research and data is the important part
4.this part is literature review that i wrote ,but why it belongs to methodology.Methodology should pay more attention to design research, not introduce CSR.
- WHY there are a lot of number in each sentence.
- Each chapter should have some sub-title
- Format
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