Social work research, Family disintegration in Academic Performance among High School Students in the U.S

I will send u my research , I did until literature review but need some change u can see that below that what should u do :

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My professor comment: I need to change what she mentioned in her comment.

Literature Review should flow in the order of your thesis statement.

Theme 1: Family Disintegration (define the variables that define family disintegration).Discuss literature that focuses on the Family Disintegration using the variables you defined.

Theme 2:Discuss academic performance.

Theme 3:Discuss how your population (high school students specifically) define by age are impacted by Family Integration.Consider how developmental theories maybe applied.

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Students are to add the Methodology Section of the Research Proposal using the Detailed Research Guide to build on research content (Research questions, hypothesis, sampling, instrumentation, etc). On the detailed guide the section is highlighted as yellow.