Topic:
Sketch a people who you used to know.
1. Describe the person’s appearance.
2. Quote what the person says.
3. Describe what the person does.
4. Tell what others say and think about the person.
Story background:
I am an International Student. I had been U.S four years, but I still was not fit the American’s style life. I used to needed some suggestion from people. Then I was knew a good people who is my ESL teacher. His name is calling Raymond. He came from Italy, and he always told students that his experience about his U.S life. He had helped me a lot. Because of my listening and speaking was going well after I toke his class. He used to be talking with me. This is the reason why my listening and speaking got more and more good. In other hand, he did helping other students also. For example, a student has a part-time job, but he does not know how to reported his income and tax. Then, Raymond teaches he how to pay tax to government step by step.
Requirement:
Five paragraphs!! 300-350 words.
1. Thesis statement.
2. An outline in time chunks and separate form the essay provides an overview of the essay.
3. The essay organization directly relates to the moments in the outline.
4. The opening captures the reader’s attention.
5. The writing includes significant details to pique the reader’s imagination.
6. Effective active verb choices bring the essay to life for the reader.
7. The essay clearly explains what was learned or why it was important.
8. Verb tenses are used consistently.
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