The essay has an effective title. The essay provides a rich discussion of the context and history of the problem or issue. The essay identifies at least five relevant stakeholders. At least four of these stakeholders are active advocates. The essay analyzes the positions of these five stakeholders, applying stasis theory. The essay is effectively organized around a thesis or controlling idea. The essay incorporates and synthesizes relevant and quality research, including at least 10 sources. The essay cites all sources and includes a works cited page. The essay is at least 1500 words in length.
As you respond, you might ask yourself these questions: Is there information missing in the discussion of the context and history? Could they analyze one of the stakeholders with more complexity or clarity? Do you have suggestions for improving a discussion of one of the stakeholders? Are sources integrated well—Do you have suggestions about their uses of sources? Try using the describe-evaluate-suggestion model.
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