Based on the current statistics of the COVID-19 Pandemic in the United States, indicating 641,919 confirmed cases, 28,399 deaths and 52,196 recoveries, doctors and public health personnel have advised for social distancing and stressed on self-quarantine, and optimal hygiene levels. It is obvious that the current positive cases, may have contracted the virus unknowingly because they touched surfaces or people who are already contaminated. Hence, the basic reason for the appeal for basic hygiene, social distancing, and self-quarantine. Social distancing is not just staying 1.5 meters away as directed, but it also needs one to limit their social life, and stay at home as the best remedy to contain the pandemic. In the implementation of these simple steps, we are able to curb the effects of the pandemic.
The feedback: This is still an abstract statement in terms of using concrete language.
Here’s an example of how to improve:
“28,299 deaths. That’s the same number of students at Temple University. Imagine all of them, gone.”
“curb the effects of the pandemic. We can get back to meeting and hugging, laughing, screaming even. We can feel the friendly embrace of a loved one. We can look them in the eyes, not a camera screen. We can get back to learning skills that will help us become what we want to become…”
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