i wrote this paper and my graduate school professor gave it back with notes and a request for rewrite, i don’t have the time, so i need someone to rewrite it for me using the professor edits and some revision in general. i have attached 1. my original paper 2. the revised version by the professor with the notes in red 3. the original readings for the assignment
word count has to be 1000
this is what the original assignment initially was: workshop for warriors
- What was Hernan Luis y Prado’s “why” when he founded WFW? Has that been carried out effectively as WFW has grown? Why or why not?
- Why was VetPowered an important factor in creating a sustainable organizational model?
- Why and how do they leverage partnerships with manufacturers and employers in advanced manufacturing? Is this unique in the social enterprise arena? If so, why?
- What is WFW’s vision for growth and expansion? What are the challenges they face?
- What are other observations or insights you have following the site visit about their approach to social enterprise, training solutions and related impact for transitioning military and veterans? What’s working well? Where might there be gaps?
- Why have they been able to grow so rapidly today- as represented by their acquisition of land, growing number of funders and partners, etc.? How have they leveraged perceived needs and support in the market?
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