The essay is a Discipline Investigation, and need to do some changes of the essay follow my instructor advise and requirements. 300-500 word might be to add, most of it are making revise and change structure.
I will attach my essay, revise suggestion list with the essay requirement, the sample essay, and the essay interview 4 attachments below. Please read the essay and the sample essay carefully first, and then follow and check every single advice I gave to make change. There are also some changes you might need to reference my interview at the last attachment.
The most important things is to FOLLOW EVERY BULLET POINT IN THE ESSAY REQUIREMENT. Please make sure every paragraph can satisfy each single requirement. You can add or omitted everything necessary, the word limit is 1500-2000.
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