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- Urgent. Helps readers understand the urgency of the issue using experience, current events, analysis, and data; identifies specific cultural and emotional obstacles to change.
- Unique. Makes clear how the strategy uses understanding of culture and emotion to improve on past approaches and create meaningful impact.
- Detailed. Articulates specific analysis and measurable benchmarks of cultural change that are carefully connected to the strategy.
- Coherent. Proposes a solution that clearly matches strategies to its unique analysis of needs & strengths; clear and compelling flow from section to section.
- Course-engaged. Builds from Needs & Strengths, enriches points with specific readings, targets specific schemas, and uses detailed understanding of culture and emotion to drive change.
- Public-ready. Shows concise writing with just enough detail to prove the point. Features perfect grammar, compelling titles, and style that engages the reader.
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