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REVISE my PLATO’S ALLEGORY OF CAVE essay

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Instructions: Write an essay (not to exceed one (1) page, i.e., 750 words that accomplishes the following:

1. Summarize Plato’s argument clearly identifying the conclusion and the premises.

2. Discuss the link between education/knowledge and one’s ability to govern.

3. Discuss Plato’s assessment of democracy as a system of governance and who is best equipped to lead society.

4. Write a critique of Plato’s political philosophy as expressed in the Allegory of the Cave. For example, what could possibly go wrong in a society that is governed by an “elite” group of individuals?

5. Be sure to include a counterexample. (We have to anticipate objections/rebuttals to an argument.)

Essays (150 points.)


Allegory of the Cave.pdf

Plato: https://www.iep.utm.edu/plato/ (Links to an external site.)

The Republic: https://www.iep.utm.edu/republic/ (Links to an external site.)

Socrates: https://www.iep.utm.edu/socrates/ (Links to an external site.)

Video:

Allegory of the Cave (video 1): Link (Links to an external site.)

Allegory of the Cave (video 2): Link (Links to an external site.)

Allegory of the Cave (video 3): Link (Links to an external site.)

Criteria Ratings Pts

Introduction:Writer introduces the author and the title of their essay, states the author’s thesis (conclusion), and advises audience how they will proceed.

30.0 to >23.9 pts

Proficient

23.9 to >20.9pts

Average

20.9 to >17.9pts

Below Average

17.9 to >0 pts

Unsatisfactory

30.0pts

Argument pt. 1:Writer provides clear and concise summary of author’s argument.

30.0 to >23.9 pts

Proficient

23.9 to >20.9pts

Average

20.9 to >17.9pts

Below Average

17.9 to >0 pts

Unsatisfactory

30.0pts

Argument pt. 2Writer constructs an argument with clearly delineated premises and conclusion; additionally, writer substantiates their claims.

30.0 to >23.9 pts

Proficient

23.9 to >20.9pts

Average

20.9 to >17.9pts

Below Average

17.9 to >0 pts

Unsatisfactory

30.0pts

Argument pt. 3Writer anticipates objections to their claims, and writes a conclusion summarizing the main points of their argument.

30.0 to >23.9 pts

Proficient

23.9 to >20.9pts

Average

20.9 to >17.9pts

Below Average

17.9 to >0 pts

Unsatisfactory

30.0pts

This essay is grammatically sound and free from spelling and punctuation errors, and is 700 to 750 words.

30.0 to >23.9 pts

Proficient

23.9 to >20.9pts

Average

20.9 to >17.9pts

Below Average

17.9 to >0 pts

Unsatisfactory

30.0pts

Total Points: 150.0

.doc file

I already wrote the essay, here are the comments I received

Your paper is very interesting. However, as an argument you do need to make some revisions. You spend far too much time explaining the cave scenario. There is not much Deve;lopment of your argument. To say you agree with Plato is no argument. Additionally, there is not counterexample. We must anticipate objections to our claims.
Therefore, I suggest that you edit/revise your essay to address the aforementioned issues.
If you have any questions, send me an email or text.

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