This is the Professor feedback, please read carefully the recommendations and correct the mistakes
Professor feedback: Hi! I reviewed the paper for content and grammar, and content-wise, you make some good points about the research involving cardiovascular disease. The biggest issue I noticed in the paper was a tendency toward wordiness, and I also noticed quite a few typos and minor word choice errors as well. Format-wise, you’ll want to make sure each paragraph of the paper is indented, not left-aligned as it is here, and you’ll also want to make sure that the “References” heading is centered, not left-aligned. I’ve included more detailed comments in the paper itself (see attached file), and I hope you find those comments helpful as you revise.
1. Check out my embedded comments in the paper (see attached file).
2. Avoid wordiness as much as you can.
3. Proofread.
4. Make sure those paragraphs are indented and the “References” heading centered.
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