I’m working on a health & medical project and need an explanation to help me learn.
I have some problem statement but the Professor not very happy with it. Please look at it, and finish the proposal. The writing 25 pages, and will with Turnitin, Please look at file for details.
Here are the comment about the Problem statement
“There is absolutely no denying the fact that homelessness is a problem and one health issue that relates is mental health. This is a compelling and important area for public health to partner and collaborate in communities to support long-term sustainable change. Three things that I recommend as you work on your abbreviated problem statement are: 1) Organize your information so you are telling a story about a specific health problem; 2) include transition sentences that help you create the connections between the content and establish important relationships; and 3) support all of your claims.”
Thank


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