The title is how business heroes in the past and recent influenced the American Dream. Proofreading
I already finished the paper. Helping to fix the grammar mistakes, unsuitable content, repeating words and the MLA citation.
At the same time, I think my conclusion(the summary) is too simple,can you give me some advices to fix it?
Rubric:Please help me to check my essay through the rubric details.
Quantity
2 Amount of information is plentiful enough to answer the research question thoroughly (10 pages)
Quantity
2 Number of resources are adequate and reliable (6 or more reliable sources)
Quality
2 progress beyond comments was made
Quality
2 there is a clear introduction and conclusion
Quality
2 The thesis represents the entire paper
Quality
2 Topic sentences represent information in paragraphs
Structure
2 The organization follows the outline logically
Structure
2 Information is quoted and paraphrased correctly
Structure
2 Sources are synthesized / integrated
Grammar
2 Does not impede reading comprehension.
Citations
2 Follows MLA rules for in text citations
Citations
2 Works Cited page is formatted correctly according to updated MLA
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