Please help me edit and finish my Sonnet poem of English!
Poem-
If I had the chance to become a boy
Then I would do the things that girls cannot
To eat all the good food that I enjoy
To say things like, “I don’t care, I forgot.”
Poem-
If I had the chance to become a boy
Then I would do the things that girls cannot
To eat all the good food that I enjoy
To say things like, “I don’t care, I forgot.”
And no- no more, no more of blood per month.
To not carry a child in me, oh joy!
Blood smeared on me as I go out to hunt.
To be as strong as any man from Troy.
To make a girl cry of a broken heart
To worry not about the clothes I wear
To freely say that I just want to fart
To just be free and say that “I don’t care”
Oh, how grand it would be to be a boy
To be the best rather than just a toy.
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