please follow the note and correct my essay
1-Work on a clearer ending.
2-You should be focusing more on applying/integrating the terminology you learned about in the rhetorical analysis packet and fallacies unit. You also needed 4-6 comparison points, and you only include 3. Finally focus more on what the authors are doing rather than what they are saying.
3-In a rhetorical analysis, it is especially important to integrate quotations from both articles as much as possible since this analysis involves taking a close look at the precise language of each author.
4-You should have 4-6 body paragraphs which address one of the following: claims, reasons, assumptions, evidence, appeals, fallacies (lack thereof), counterarguments, or organizational strategies. You should be putting one of those terms in bold. Finally, be sure to address both authors and make a clear claim about which was more effective regarding one of the above topics for each body paragraph.
5-Your thesis should address 4-6 of the following: claims, reasons, assumptions, evidence, appeals, fallacies (lack thereof), counterarguments, or organizational strategies.
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