Hi, I wrote this essay based on a movie and a book called The Reader (1995). I need someone professional to edit this paper and revise it to make it more credible, fluent, and have a solid thesis that goes well with my paper. Most of it is written and i will paste the criteria I was graded on below:
Note: There are already some edits in the paper so work off of that.
Evaluation Criteria (30 points total):
Thesis and Topic (6): 3
Content (6): essay lacks structure. In order to analyze the text precision and proper historical contextualization are needed. 3.5
Research (6): No scholarly material is included. 3 I NEED CREDIBLE SOURCES PLEASE!
Presentation—Format MLA, writing style, spelling, etc. (5): Weaknesses of style and expression.Weak conclusion: unspecific and trivial 3.5
Originality (6): 4
Total: 17 F
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