given feedback of “This paper uses soe words and concepts that Boddy provides in the book, but does not address the questions that guide the paper and does not use social science concepts. Many sentences are not comprehensible. ” can someone please break it down to what it should look like?
Needs to be specifically a ethnography. show me how it should of looked like. please read in red the comments from the professor.
added was the directions of the paper that is 6-7 pages double spaced.
added the readings also.
I need to know how it should of been done based on the comments in order to not mess up again. Just redo the whole thing so I may understand the topic.
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