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Question 3 (20 marks)

Read the UN’s response to Singapore’s first and second reports and compare them with our
most recent submissions (fourth and fifth reports). Select ONE (1) issue raised by the UN as
an area for improvement and discuss if you think Singapore has indeed made significant
improvements. The issue you select must be relevant to young children (birth through age 8)
and their families.

You should analyse and interpret Singapore’s progress in the issue by reviewing relevant
local news articles, reports and other reliable sources as evidence to support your argument.
You could also include ECDA’s Early Childhood Development Centre licensing
requirements and media announcements from the period of 2017 – 2019.

Reference: https://www.msf.gov.sg/policies/Children-and-Youth/Pages/Obligations-under-the-UN-Convention-on-the-Rights-of-the-Child.aspx

Answer is attached!