Narrative Essay : VERY EASY

What are you going to write about? Well, you have a choice about which story — a real story from your life — you would like to share. You can either write about:

• One particular story from your life that portrays a significant moment when you realized something, discovered something, or changed as a person. Ideally, this would represent a moment, less than twenty-four hours.*** This is how the story goes… woke up in the morning met up with the cohen family. Cohen family – ( Ron :big brother. Same age as my brother .Jordan :middle brother that is my age. Michael : little brother. And Eli: dad). I was with my father my brother. (My name is Sean Ashkenazi ….JAck : father. Eden : big brother ). We all left and we were in my hummer h2. We took the atvs to a random place in the desert. We started atving setting up camp and eventually it was only me Jordan and my dad playing poker because there were no atvs to use at the time. They were all being used. My dad had an idea and said let’s take the hummer on an expedition. Me and Jordan went in and my dad went up the biggest mountain and got stuck. We walked back to camp and told the others. We thought we were stuck there all night. We had to get fire wOod and set up a sleeping camp. We called Jordan’s mom sigal come here and help. We saw 2 monster trucks and the ended up towing the car and Jordans mom arrved with th I don’t like Cadillac Escalade. We went home and thats the end. Make the story with Mo details and dialogue. ****outline on bottom***

The narrative essay must demonstrate your ability to tell a story that has these features:

1. Has a sense of time and place (setting)
2. Has relatable, identifiable characters
3. Focuses on actions (events) and shows
   1. a crisis or crises, a climax (turning point), and a resolution
4. Is highly descriptive in nature
5. Includes dialogue
6. Is clearly organized and easy to follow
7. May be narrated in either first or third person perspective
8. Has importance and significance, and connects to the reader

For this particular assignment, you do not need a Works Cited page since you are telling your own story. Some particulars for this assignment:

1. It should be formatted in MLA style
2. Length: 5-7+ pages.

Stuck in the Desert outline

Thesis Statement: I was planning on having a nice day until things took a turn for the worst.

Three Sections:

1.Rising action that includes at least one crisis:

We were going on an atv trip. All the atvs were being used. The only people left were me, my dad and my family friend. We all were bored and my dad has an idea. His idea was to take out our h2 hummer on an expedition and go explore and have a good time.

2.A climax or turning point to the story:

My dad started driving around mountains and saw a big mountain. He automatically went towards it and got the car stuck on the biggest mountain. We walked back to camp and we werent the only ones with a problem. My family friends dad came back to camp with a broken atv. We had to figure out what to do and how to resolve the problem.

3. The resolution of the story:

We found 2 people with monster trucks. My father went to go talk to them and got them to help us out. My family friends mom was on the way already because we thought we were stuck for the night. The monster trucks towed my car down the mountain. We went home.