Proofread my essay and fix it according to all the comments given. Add the subheadings before every main point and follow these two rubrics.
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Content |
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Introduction – ½ page |
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Includes attention getter |
____________/1 |
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Provides appropriate entry to topic |
____________/3 |
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States research question(s)/research thesis |
____________/1 |
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Body – 8-9 pages |
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Presents a structured body that includes all fully developed sections of paper |
____________/20 |
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Includes headings that reflect paper organization |
____________/5 |
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Supports points/arguments with credible source material and cites definitions of key terms/ideas as applicable |
____________/20 |
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Synthesizes multiple sources |
____________/15 |
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Shows evidence of critical thinking and in-depth analysis |
____________/5 |
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Conclusion – ½ page |
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Restates main points and/or answers research question(s) |
____________/5 |
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References – 1 or more pages |
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Contains all and only cited texts |
____________/2 |
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Mechanics |
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Is accurate in grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, word choice, and use of transitions |
____________/10 |
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Citations |
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Uses correct APA in-text citations |
____________/3 |
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Includes correct APA references |
____________/2 |
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Format/layout |
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Follows APA page layout (title page, running head, headings, font) |
____________/3 |
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Revision |
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Incorporates feedback from Working Draft |
____________/5 |
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Total |
____________/100 |
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Elements |
Points |
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Content |
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Title Page |
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Abstract and Key Words |
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Summarizes research paper in about 150 words |
_____/4 |
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Lists 3-5 key words |
_____/1 |
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Introduction – up to 1 page |
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Includes attention getter |
_____/1 |
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Provides appropriate entry to the topic |
_____/2 |
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States research question(s)/research thesis |
_____/2 |
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Body – 9-11 pages |
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Presents a well-structured and logically argued discussion |
_____/15 |
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Includes headings that reflect the paper organization |
_____/3 |
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Supports all points/arguments with credible source material and cites definitions of key terms/ideas as applicable |
_____/15 |
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Synthesizes multiple sources |
_____/7 |
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Shows originality, critical thinking and in-depth analysis |
_____/10 |
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Conclusion – up to 1 page |
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Restates main points and/or answers the research question(s) |
_____/3 |
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Comes to logical conclusion from evidence |
_____/3 |
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Makes final comment(s) |
_____/2 |
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References |
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Contains all and only the cited texts |
_____/2 |
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Style |
Entire paper |
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Is polished in tone and style appropriate for academic writing |
_____/5 |
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Mechanics |
Entire paper |
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Is accurate in grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, word choice, and transitions, using variety in sentence structure |
_____/10 |
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Citations |
Entire paper |
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Uses correct APA in-text citations |
_____/2 |
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Includes correct APA references |
_____/3 |
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Format/ Layout |
Entire paper |
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Follows APA page layout (title page, running head, headings, font, etc.) |
_____/5 |
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Revision |
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Incorporates feedback from the First Full Draft |
_____/5 |
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Total |
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_____/100 |
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