Read all the phases and then look at the comments on the right side of the paper both from Mehdi and Megan. All these comments based on my work phases 6 and 7. You do not need to make any changes on phases 1-5. Phase 6 and 7 of these phases I got the feedback on.
Make sure to keep all the initial feedback, and any changes or adding from your side must be in using a red color so I can identify your work easily.
Address these issues and place them in their correct places.
If you have any questions, please send me. Because I need to involved with any revision.
Again you need to read all phases to know what my workshop about and who is my audience etc…
Attached are my work, and the description for phase 6 and 7.
The description attached will give you a clear idea about how phases 6 and 7 should be done.
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