the paper was already written! (i will upload it after i choose a tutor)
please read what the student wants to be added more into his paper:
you have the make the explainations longer of what i do for the day look at the sample.. my relgion is christian and my ethnicity is armenian
please look at the sample paper and guidelines i provided .. it has to be much longer .. sorry but i need to do well and i havent had time to do it myself.
look at the instructions along with the sample paper
Her paragraphs much detailed and you missed some of the things she was asking for as i mentioned
detailed anaylsis of why you ate the food and when you ate it and where you were
paragrpah explaintion of each day where do most of the calories come from and give ex desribe patterns of food any excess or defincies
RDA ( look it up )
provide food choices that will improve diet
culture religion – armenian christian
provide more detailed diet plan
look at 9 and 10 bullet points for smart goals
and for each goal develop implemenatation
do more on phycial and emotional anaysis
WAY MORE DETAIL ON FOOD NOTES YOU WROTE .
thank you.
and the calicum potassium all of that stuff please add more like 3 more sentences.
also check the instructions and the model paper to check if everything was included!
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