Thesis statement : Animal testing should not be done with the cosmetic industry because they do not reliably predict results in human beings, animal testing is cruel and inhumane, and alternative testing methods now exist that can replace the need for animals.
- 5 – 7 pages
- 5 – 7 sources
- work cited page (at least page number 6)
- 5 – 7 in text citations
- your thesis needs to have the word(s): should, must, needs – or should not, must not
- MLA <— if your MLA is incorrect, your essay will go down a full grade – IF I FIND MORE THAN FOUR MLA ERRORS
- This is in all three points of view (1st – I want this to change) (2nd – you need to make this change) (3rd – all of the background and research information)
- It is also past tense and present tense (past tense – a little history and background information) (present tense – you need to make this change now!)
- Your topic is up to you – as long as it is a proposal for advocacy for change. YOU feel strongly about something that you want to change, you research your ideas to back up your proposal – from credible sources, and you prove to me why this change should be made. You are arguing your point, and proving your point (using sources).
- work citied page MLA format needed at the end of the essay


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