SUBMITTING FINAL CAPSTONE PROJECT

REQUIRED READING

Avoiding Clichés in Writing. (n.d.). The University of Richmond Writing Center.http://writing2.richmond.edu/writing/wweb/cliche.html

How to Avoid Colloquial (Informal) Writing (n.d.) http://www.uaisresearch.com/uploads/2/7/1/6/2716219/how_to_avoid_informal_writing.pdf

Brief overview of punctuation. (1995-2020). Purdue Online Writing Lab, Purdue University. https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/punctuation/punctuation/index.html

REQUIRED WEBSITE

Merriam-Webster Online: Dictionary, Thesaurus, Spanish-English, Medical: http://www.merriam-webster.com/

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HLS599 CASE ASSIGNMENT FEEDBACK

Overall Feedback that needs fixing for this Capstone Project
Assignment-Driven Criteria:
This is a good paper on Wildfire in the State of California. The paper could be improved with additional content, and consideration.
Some suggestions to improve the paper include:
Recommendations:
– The paper should discusses how in the National Response Framework and the National Incident Management System prepares communities for this type of disaster. Include the discussion any local plans that are currently in place.
– Provide additional discussion on the how the local, state and federal levels link during preparedness, mitigation response and recovery. There are several laws in place to include Robert T. Stafford Disaster Relief, Emergency Assistance Act (Public Law 93-288) as amended Homeland Security Act of 2002, Homeland Security Presidential Directive 5, Homeland Security Presidential Directive 8, and the Post-Katrina Emergency Management Reform Act of 2006
– The paper should address the private sector contributions and refer to the NRF Private Sector Coordination Support Annex. Many of these services would be secured through a contract arrangement and included in the emergency plans.
– Discuss the State of California Emergency Plan & Emergency Support Functions on wildfires (https://www.caloes.ca.gov/cal-oes-divisions/planning-preparedness/state-of-california-emergency-plan-emergency-support-functions)
The paper reads good, it is not confusing. It is structured good. Read over to include any additional changes that you find in your review such as providing additional in-text references to support major points.