The essay requires two in class sources and 4 other online sources. It has to be double spaced with a works sited page. I have wrote an introduction which is a page and I need the rest done. There has to be a counterargument paragraph and each claim has to be one paragraph. There should also be metacommentary. I only have 2 of the in class sources which I can provide and you will need to find 4 other sources online. Please make this related to the introduction and work on the essay based off the introduction paragraph.
This is the introduction that I wrote:
Many people believe that food industries and fitness industries are meant to be working against each other, but in reality, they both need each other to maximize profits and keep businesses running. This has caused many Americans to lose money since they became addicted to the food made and served by those companies and on the other hand, they would also need to spend even more money to lose the weight they gained from those restaurants. In many cases, people have taken actions that they may now regret due to their weight, which has affected their health and might have resulted in depression or other health issues. In general, food industries are working towards making you gain more weight, which would then force you into signing up for a gym membership or maybe head straight to the closest nutritionists. At times one would go to a weight loss shop that you can buy all the supplements you need to lose that weight, then you would gain that weight again at those same restaurants and repeat the cycle. By doing that, you are making sure that both the fitness industry and food industry are still in business and they are making enough profit. Money is among the many factors that have a significant impact on fitness and how fit people are.
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