Its a report which needs some editing, you need to edit the below mentioned things in it
I think the plan has a good overall structure but would benefit from focusing in on a specific waste issue that you could explore in more detail. You might also consider focusing on waste management at a regional district level, such as Metro Vancouver, rather than the province as a whole. I have offered some thoughts below on how you could develop what you already have to accommodate these suggestions.
In the introduction, you clearly explained the B.C. regional waste management context and importance of tackling this topic. I think it would then be advisable to narrow your focus to a specific district, such as Metro Van or another, and explain that you will focus on an environmentally problematic waste component. My suggestion here would be plastics, as this is the topic you return to at the end for your infographic. The following website may be helpful:
https://cleanbc.gov.bc.ca/plastics/
You have the right idea in relation to identifying key stakeholders and explaining their roles and the diagram works well. However, you should provide the specific names of the key groups, such Environment and Climate Canada, Metro Vancouver, etc. This would be easier to do if you are focused on one specific waste management district. In focusing on a specific waste component, it will also be easier to identify some of the businesses that are key in solving this issue (e.g. plastic bottle manufacturers, retailers, restaurants). In addition, there are several NGOs involved in the movement for Zero Plastics waste, including the following: ca/learn-zero-waste“>https://spec.bc.ca/learn-zero-waste
Although it involves more work, I think this more focused approach will improve your project and will help you to clearly define your sustainable waste management strategies and recommendations. You can address what has already been done to solve the plastics problem in Metro Van (or another region) and suggest further steps that could be taken here, or even how the innovations in Vancouver could be applied to other BC communities that are not doing as well in managing the plastics problem. Currently, you attempt to incorporate many different waste topics, so your management plan is not very clearly defined. In terms of the material you already have on management approaches, I think it needs editing, but much of the text could be adapted quite easily to address the specific issue of tackling plastics waste pollution. For example, you might consider industry standards for plastics producers, for the government role in banning items like plastic bags, strategies for educating households about plastics reduction, etc.
On the infographic, you have the right idea, but it should also include some information on the key strategies you are suggesting to tackle the plastics waste problem. This version outlines the problem but does not have suggestions for solutions.
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