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2. Discuss your investigation of the problem or issue.
a.
Include evidence to substantiate the problem or issue (e.g.,
organizational assessment, national source documents, evidence from a
stakeholder).
A2- The presentation provides substantial
data and support for the need to address childhood obesity. A detailed
discussion on how information on the issue of childhood obesity was
investigated could not be found.
4. Propose a solution or innovation for the problem or issue.
a. Justify your proposed solution or innovation based on the results of your investigation and analysis.
A4a-
A proposed solution of promoting healthier foods, restricting unhealthy
goods, and increasing health curriculum is found. A detailed discussion
of this solution’s justification could not be found.
7.
Identify key stakeholders and/or appropriate partners that are
important for the implementation of your solution or innovation.
b.
Summarize your engagement with the key stakeholders and/or appropriate
partners, including the input and feedback you received.
A7b-
Identification and importance of the key stakeholders as teachers,
policy makers, and administrators is found. Additional details on how
these stakeholders will be engaged throughout the implementation
process, and provided feedback, could not be found.
c. Discuss how you intend to work with those key stakeholders and/or appropriate partners in order to achieve success.
A7c-Identification
of the stakeholders and their importance for the new process is found. A
detailed discussion of how the stakeholders will be utilized to ensure
successful implementation could not be found.
8. Discuss how your proposed solution or innovation could be implemented.
a. Discuss how the implementation could be evaluated for success.
A8a-The
submission mentions evaluating the process in the provided timeline. A
detailed discussion of how the process will be evaluated could not be
found.
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