Requirements:
1. ***Imitate my writing style! Do not make people feel like different ones have worked on this paper*** My previous works attached.
2. Please fix the problem I address below and develop the 5 Pages prospectus into an argumentative research paper, 23 Pages, MLA format.
3. Use the 5 sources in my previous works + ONLY choose 3 of your other sources related to the **economic of the Mexico drug war**
4. Most importantly your paper will be argumentative not descriptive
Problem from the Prospectus **IMPORTANT**: My concern stems primarily from the fact that once you’ve introduced your question, your explanation of your counterargument and argument don’t have citations, so it’s unclear what sources you’re relying on and whether you actually have enough to credibly make those claims. For example – how are you backing this up: “Spending habits change in such circumstances, and this erodes the domestic markets.”? What evidence do you have that spending habits changed in Mexico as a result of drug war violence? It may be that you do, since you’ve got decent sources, but you need to make sure you integrate them into your arguments, since it’s very easy to make assumptions about what impact violence will have rather than basing your claims on evidence. Does that make sense?
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