I need help with a research paper rough draft. In class we had to pick a problem/ issue that makes us apart of that community. I have chosen the cosmetic industry. In the word document that I have attached to this, it explains in there my reasons. The professor has also, attached her notes to the first question in the attached file. I have attached her comment below.
Remember that your final product will need to include both your explanation and examination of the problem and a possible solution that you’re posing to the specific audience you’re targeting. Each aspect should be supported with quality, credible evidence.
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Professor comment: I think a little bit more clarity about the
specific problem will be helpful as you move forward. For example, do you think
the popularity is a problem? Do you think the expense is a problem? Is there
some other problem within the industry that you want to focus on? Once your
problem is clearly defined, you will likely be better able to identify a
specific audience to target and a specific solution to pose.


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