hello Ryan,
i want help in writing a proposal essay, the assingment is due tomorrow morning at 10 am. the essay has to be about ‘racsim’ and how it affects the socity ( in a bad way i mean ) the assingment must be MLA style and highschool kind of writing, it must contain at least 3 resources of information and it must be cited at the end of the essay. the essay must be 2 pages ( no more than that though )
i am providing a sample with instructions of what i want my essay to look like.
Being Black in America
Poverty is conversational issue that is threateningthe African American society[LN1] . Therefore, I become[LN2] more interested to looking deep[LN3] into this issue. Since Tennessee[LN4] State University is a black school, I like[LN5] to do my research about African American poverty which is the same community I am in now[LN6] . Otherwise, my research maybe is useful for other researchers[LN7] , who are interested in the same topic since[LN8] poverty is a global problem, being everywhere. In African American society poverty has constituted extremely damage specifically in male’s life. [LN9] Regardless to[LN10] my reading through books and articles, here is listing of questions that is my research about[LN11] . What is the[LN12] poverty? Why poverty is paramount issue[LN13] ? What does it mean to be poor? What are the influences in[LN14] African male poverty? How has poverty changed over time? Are the homelessness is a poverty issue [LN15] and what is the relationship between the homelessness and racism?
Poverty is an important problem in African American society because poverty can force a young black male to do a bad behavior. [LN16] Also, poverty can effect in the black male’s life such as [LN17] educationally, socially, and occupationally. As result, lack of opportunities, level of education, unsocial[LN18] life, or get job[LN19] , are[LN20] may simulate the black male to make a bad decision. Consequently, in 2010 the rate of poverty of [LN21] black male has[LN22] increased due to deterioration intheeconomicsituation.[LN23] Moreover, racismis often effect in any issue, so the[LN24] homelessness is a racial issue due to increase [LN25] the rate of black male in the shelter than the white regardless to the statistic.
“Causes and Effects of Poverty.” Causes and Effects of Poverty. N.p., n.d. Web. 27 Oct. 2013.
“Homelessness: It’s About Race, Not Just Poverty.” City Limits News. N.p., n.d. Web. 27 Oct. 2013.
Rogers, Barbara. White Wealth and Black Poverty: American Investments in Southern Africa. Westport, Connecticut: Green Press, Inc., 1976.
Brill, Norman. Being Black in America Today. Springfield, Illinois: Charles C Thomas P.1999.
Iceland, John. Poverty in America. Los Angeles, California: the Regents of the University of California P .2003.
Hollander, Jacob. Poverty in Influence: the Social, Political, and Economic Dimension of Poverty in the United Stated. 2nd ed New York: Harcourt, Brace, and world, Inc.1965. [LN26]
Regardless to[LN27] the questions I write for my researche[LN28] r, I need to find more specific information about my topic by look[LN29] into other books. Reading other researcher[LN30] about the poverty may provide great ideas. Also, in articles and journey[LN31] I can find good information supporting my topic. Doing[LN32] interview with African American is one of the significant resources that I am going to use. Furthermore, watching documenter’s movies [LN33] is going to be way to get some data about poverty[LN34] .
[LN1]Threatening African Americans.—When you use the term African American and then society, it makes it exclusive to one culture, and I don’t think you intended to do so.
[LN2]Have become
[LN3]deeper
[LN4]I attend Tennessee State University (a Black school)
[LN5]would like
[LN6]you don’t need to add that it is the same community
[LN7]Additionally, my research may be useful for…
[LN8](since poverty is a global problem)—no need to emphasize everywhere because that is what global means.
[LN9]Poverty has caused extreme damage to males, specifically African American males.
[LN10]of
[LN11]that are about my research
[LN12]omit
[LN13]why is poverty a paramount issue?
[LN14]of
[LN15]Is homelessness an issue related to poverty and
[LN16]Poverty is a significant problem for African Americans because it can for a young black male to exhibit bad behavior.
[LN17]omit
[LN18]what does this mean?
[LN19]Or employment
[LN20]Are issues that may simulate his bad decisions.
[LN21]For the Black malee
[LN22]Had—past tense because it is 2013.
[LN24]omit
[LN25]resulting from the increased rate of Black males in shelters being higher than white males regardless of the statistic.– I am not exacly sure what you are tyring to say here, but this is a suggestion as to a possible grammatical repair.
[LN26]This should be on its on page that is titled “bibliography:”
[LN27]of
[LN28]research
[LN29]looking
[LN30]researcher’s insight
[LN31]journals,
[LN32]an interview with an African American male is one of the most significant resources that I am going to use.
[LN33]Documentaries will be a way to get some data about poverty as well.
[LN34]I hope this helps you some. It is something that maybe with your project I can set up a few times to work with you on this. I will also try and see if I can find some resources for you as well.
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