I want to establish my own Executive Search firm in Switzerland soon. I am currently developing my own website which you can find here: https://artur-prib.webflow.io/ -> The website is officially not online yet! I need a native speaker who can help me to write some text for my website and our company brochure. Our unique value proposition is at the moment not properly described on the website and I want to change that. So what I need is support in explaining the value proposition in regards to (see screenshot) a) 100% Dedication (I want to explain what it means and what the benefits are for our clients) and b) Leadership and Executive Network !Referring now to the Content about our Services such as Executive Search, Talent Intelligence Advisory, etc.
Well, I need a) 2 new articles (about the value proposition) b) I need you to proofread and rewrite an existing one c) I need you to write an overview about the problems our clients face and how we fix this problems for our clients and d) last and least I need you to rewrite a few pages of text for our company brochure! We offer 8 different Services. And I want to explain in a short text what each of the Services contains. In the document attached I have collected content that you can use to get some inspiration and which you can use as a starting point. Keep it as precise as possible. These small Texts about all our Services will be later added to our website and to our company brochure. And since clients are very lazy and do not want to read a lot, we need to keep it as precise and short as possible.
I did not want you just to make corrections in the texts, but rather rewriting the text. What you have sent me back is almost a copy of what I have shared with you. The Text/Content that I have shared with you before was copy past from different competitor websites and brochures.
My goal is not just to copy what they have written but rather to take their Text as the foundation for inspiration and rewriting it for our purpose.
May I kindly ask you to send me an updated version, please!?
Attached are the files I wanted fixed I will also send you the originals
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